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The mountain

 

Up the mountain I can see wipe outs, chairlifts hovering, snow machines rumbling, snow boarders dashing and ski passes flashing.

I can hear poles swishing, skis clashing, magic carpet rumbling, boots clunking and chairlifts squeaking.

I can taste gritty snow, salty sweat, hot chips, blood and trembling fear.

I can smell wet clothes, greasy sunscreen, fresh snow, pies and café smells.

I can feel cold snow, warm toes, dry blood on my skin , greasy sunscreen and food on my chin.

 

By Stephanie Austin

 

 

Kids under 13 should be allowed face book pages.

I disagree that kids under 13 should be allowed face book pages. These are the reasons why: online bullying, inappropriate stuff and kids might give away personal information.

Firstly, I have heard a rumour that kids can be bulled. Your friends might say do you want to go to the park? If you go, your friends might not be there and there might be someone else there and bully you.

Secondly, kids could be looking at inappropriate stuff and their Mum  and Dads might not know about it. There will be inappropriate videos and jokes constantly popping up on the computer screens.

Lastly, kids might give away personal information like their phone number ,their address and their age and could be stolen identity.

So that is why I disagree that kids under 13 should be allowed a face book page I hope your on my side and now understand some of the negatives about young people have Face book. By Katie sparkes

 

 

 

Kids under 13 should be allowed Facebook pages.

I agree that kids under 13 should be allowed Facebook pages. These are the reasons why, you can report inappropriate stuff, you can contact your friends that are overseas, and your parents can keep you safe.

Firstly if anything bad comes up on someone’s page you can report the person that wrote the post.

Secondly you can talk to your friends that are overseas or away from home you can ask how their holiday is going or when they are coming back.

Lastly if anything rude or offensive comes up your mum or dad could help you or get rid of the writing.

I agree that kids under 13 should be allowed Facebook page. by Harry

 

All 18 year old must be trained and ready to go to war.

I disagree that all 18 year olds must be trained and ready to go to war

Because some people might want to go to university and get a qualification,

It will be a waste of time and money,

We are more allies and enemies.

Firstly, I disagree because some people might want to go to university and get a qualification.

If they have to go to war they will be very board and tired if they were fighting For real they will gust get killed right away.

Secondly it will be a waste of time and money.

Because we could be using the money for learning.

Lastly we are more allies and enemies we are more friendly than other country

And other country are mean and nasty.

I disagree all 18 year olds must be trained and ready to go to war.

By Deemanthi

All 18year olds must be trained and ready to go to war.

If there is a war and we don’t have enough troops we will lose the war.

So if our troops are trained they will be ready with the skills to fight.

They are more mature and understand about war.

from tayla o

i disagree that everyone should be vegitarian because

we need meat and some kids and people hate vegies.

by the one and awesome harry the epic man.

 

  

All  18-year-olds must be trained and ready to go to war. I strongly disagree that all 18 year-olds should be forced to go to the army and train for war.

 

Why would your child go to the army when they could be using money to go to university and get a qualification? Why learn to shoot a gun when you could be getting a job instesad

Secondly if Japan declared war on us, we’ve got the whole british empire behind us. Australia and England are sure to help us .Plus we,ve helped england in heaps of wars so why not help us?

Lastly NZ is not a very wealthy country, we don’t go looking for trouble, we  are a very quiet country tucked down her at the bottom of the world. We are more of an allie than a enemy.

 

 I disagree that all18 year olds should be trained to go war.

 by Meredith

All 18 year olds must be trained and ready to go to war!

I agree that all 18 year olds should be forced to train in the army and be ready to go to war. The reasons I believe this are: if we don’t train to fight then the other country will come and us, having everybody trained will mean we win the war and training in the army teaches us important life skills.

Firstly, if we fight don’t another country could come and claim us. “Well think that that’s harsh” they  could take over our land and we’ll have nothing left.

Secondly, having everybody trained we might just the war then we’ll be left alone for about 25 years.  (Think about that)

Thirdly, training in the army teaches us lots of life time skills you could do anything be a builder, survival, under cover agent. (Like you’d want to be an under cover agent)

This is why I agree, join the army you don’t know where you could go. by Hanna

 

WALT: write persuasivly

All 18 year olds must be trained and ready to go to war

I disagree that all 18 year olds should be forced to be trained and ready to go to war. The reasons are that some people might want to go to university and get a qualification, we are more ally than enemy, and New Zealand doesn’t have enemies so training everyone would be a waste of time and money.

Firstly 18 year olds would rather go to university and get a qualification than go to war and get a gun or even die.

Secondly we are more an ally than an enemy so if we get attacked our ally’s will come to help us with a war.

Finally New Zealand doesn’t have enemies so training   everyone would be a waste of money and time of your life.

I disagree that all 18 year old must be trained and ready to go to war.  by Harry!

Week One Term Two
In the image above you can see a tribe pumping water.
1) Do you think it is important to save water? why/why not?
2) What are things that this tribe might use water for? Do you think they would use as much water as us?
3) What words can you think of when you look at this image? Don't use boring snoring words!

 

 

WALT: write poetry using our senses:

WALT: write a recount.

Gun boy By Terry

On the 14 march I (Gun boy) was young I was sent on a mission to rob the bank.This was the most exciting day of my life.So I said yes so I put on my suit and got my guns I was ready to do it.

Saving Auckland by Danielle

 

saving the city of Auckland

In December the 23^rd 1987 me zapper girl saved the city of Auckland with my side kick fire boy.

Firstly I got a call from the cca explaining what was happening . A well known supper villin named alin reverta from planit zoom was destoring the city of Auckland. So me and fire boy rushed of in our supper mobeil to save the people of Auckland, on the way we saw slimy black car prints made from revaerta and her evel gang.I know why she is doing it I told fire boy why he asked besause before she was a supper villin she was a supper hero. But then one day she she decied not to go on a mision and that carred on for 3 months then one day she disaperd and we lost her for ever and she thinks that we abandied her. when we got there the bank was gone and one of the car parks too, then in among all the dust we could just see a black figer with a clok long flowing hear and a big coller on the clok.
Reverta I mermed . Then when the figer came up close and yes it was Reverta. Then I looked down and as soon as I did BANG ssss I looked across and there was fire boy lying down on the grond out could I ran over and felt him he was cold then I looked up to Reverta then bang I was out to then when I woke up I remembered obout Auckland I went over to where fire boy was and lit him and when he woke up I told him to to be quite and follow me when we were out side I got the hose and fire boy gathered up the thosnds of people when the fire was out we took the people to the hostpatil .Then just before we left a lady of five chilldran said thankyou for saving he her yongst child we said that it was fine and said it was what we did then smilled and went.

 

water woman and shelly save the day by sally

When i was 16 me and shelly ( water woman) were chilling in the
car when we heard a scream, three rotten robbers had broken into... the AQUARIUM i yelled come on i said lets go
so we raced to the aquarium and when we got there we coulded
see them any where but we did find something a hole lot of mess,
we were so mad at the robbers until we went to the moutint and
saw everthing the robbers were playing in the snow with only
shrots and a t-shirt , and guss what they froze so we pick them up
and droped them in the water so that was the end of them the people who will never be seen again. we were playing around when
we herd that the robbers wernt dead and when we listen we herd the robbers say our names, the next thing we new the ploice were in our home the ploice were going to arest as we told them that they
were baddies but they did't listen we were stuck in jail but at lest we will be out in a year what busy day.

Carrot girl By stephanie

When I (carrot girl) was a young carrot I was sent on a mission to kidnap the primeinaster.We got to choose whether we had a sidekick or not .I carrot girl did not of course because I am way to cool for a side kick ! .It was the most exciting thing in my whole carrot hood.This is how I did it...

Firstly we had to gear up.I picked
out a pear of bright green underpants and a flowing red cape.We were not allowed weapons because we already had our super powers and new how to fight.My superpowers are shooting out miny me's and I can Karate chop and kick.

Next it was time to go. I carrot girl was practically dribbling with excitement.Finally we arrived .Then I had to go over theory .of course I had already thought this over and basically shouted out how I was going to kidnap the primeinaster. After what seemed like ages I very quietly snuck into the building.Then i crept into the primeinasters office and shot out some miny carrots onto him.They bean biting him.Well he was destracted with those I carate chopped him and Knocked him out.Then I tied him up and gagged him.Then I left the public a ransom note of a million dollars which they then paid me.

After that since I am evil I kept the primeinaster anyway and to this day I am still doing evil crimes.

Superhero recount by Harry

When I (massive man) was 14 I was just an ordinary kid in a school called Waikato school everyone bullied me and was mean to me. 5 years later I’m a super hero called massive man and I was I a very big twist of the world something I couldn’t doo alone… AN ALIEN INVASION. So I thought of a plan to either get a sidekick or get my butt kicked I had no choice. Time to get a sidekick. So I searched everywhere I thought that’s it times over. But just then I saw a place that I thought someone could help me at the magic shop I entered the shop there right at the entrance I saw someone doing hypnosis I thought he could help me so I went up to him and asked “could you help me with an alien invasion with your hypnosis” he said “yes I can” good finally I have a friend to help me with this. I said. so massive man and bling went to the spaceship and had to figure out how to get inside it. Massive man grew bigger and bigger with bling in his hand and put bling In the spaceship and grew into a smaller size and hopped into the spaceship and started walking around and found the hallway it was guarded by guards so massive man shrunk into a smaller size and ran across the ground then bling hypnotised all the guards into shooting their own kind and followed him. As soon as they got to the control room the war begun aliens vs. aliens World War 2 had started again. Bullets shots are everywhere like a dancing light beam. We had won the war. I thought to myself I felt I should have gotten a side kick before.

WALT: create characters.

 

Speedy O'Neil by Mitchell

My superhero is called Speedy O'Neil. He has a side kick called Musel woman.They help look after Taupo.Speedy O'Neil zips around taking back all he stolen stuff from citizens of Taupo. Musell Woman helps all the car crashes and helps out with taking away the bad people.They wear a red and black suit. So dont mess around in Taupo or speedy O'Neil and musel woman will get ya.

flash girl by sasha

My superhero is called flash girl she can shrink and be invisable. She has a sidekick called bogger  boy and he shoots glue and boggers. Flash girl can be good or evil, has x-ray vision an, superspeed (so she can dash to get her superhero gear) so she can fight crime or to fight good.The color of her clothes are red black with white stripes and her shoes are white hightops.So if your coming to Taupo any time soon watch out for Bogger Boy and Flash Girl.

MY SUPER EVIL MAN SKILLEX BY ze awesome Heath

Skill is the most super evil man a live he's the normle evil twin, his super hero brother is a jurk, the thing is that they both live in michville.Skill has a companion his ex wife to gether there Skillex he has the power of thounds of super heros but his brother is no difernt.

He still lerks on!!!!!

To be contined.....

Black Bye Julio

Black

 

 



Cody is not your ordinary teen for he lives in the school dojo unlike like any other . Most people like are street rats but not him for he is a super . e took the  name  black not much of a super name more like an assassin + he doesn't wear bright coloured suit infact he doesn't wear a suit at all. Just a black hood and jeans. Black is indestructible and after two years living in the school dojo he had learnt  every fighting there ever was and black lived in Taupo.     

Acid spitter by Archie

My soperhero is called acid spitter.Everyday he's just a normal person.He lives in taupo he looks
 normal on the out side but when he heres criy of help he transforms into these small green alian.He can here a criy from miles away when he is in he's alian form he's only about 1 metter tall.He's got a companion called left.Lefts power is he can left stuff up with hes mind.The worst villan that the two  companion have faced hes name is called skill skill was hard to take down but in the end they cought him and put him in jail acid spitter and left have don the job.